Things I liked!: - Beautiful images, amazing video!
Suggestions: - Hope you managed to finish everything on time. It would have been nice if you knew any specific tips that are essential for making a "good" latte art. (comments based only on your slides)
I loved the idea inserting nice video into your presentation:) It was interesting because I though making latte art is much harder than it actually is.
Suggestions:I though there were too many words in one slide.
Overall Impression: Very good using a video which no one else had used. I thought it was very interesting to do a topic which you are good at doing. Suggestions: Like everyone else says, maybe there were too many info in 1 slide. So keep them simple let the audience understand the presentation slides and context even better.
It was very nice that you have brought the actaul kit and showed us how to make a cappuccino! And you have used the video well to actually visually show us how cappuccios are made.
Suggestions: the video was a bit blurry and hard to see! Thats about it!
Thanks for a very enjoyable How to presentation on how to enjoy latte art. I felt it was well-prepared and presented with passion!
Likes:
1) Nice clarification of purpose at the beginning. Also, I felt you achieved it well in those 5 minutes.
2) Great use of objects and video to illustrate the steps.
3) Impressive use of voice and body language. Energetic and friendly. As you wrote, I think you spoke very effectively.
4) Nice management of Q&A. Exemplary.
Suggestions:
1) As I was watching your live presentation, I did not notice any problems at all. My notes don't show anything.
2) Watching the video again, some small points are possibly to put your notes down and speak without them (if possible). Holding notes is not a problem, but ideally you would deliver without them so that you can exert more energy and have more eye contact.
3) The font size for some slides could have been larger with fewer words, as noted by classmates above.
Things I liked!:
返信削除- Beautiful images, amazing video!
Suggestions:
- Hope you managed to finish everything on time. It would have been nice if you knew any specific tips that are essential for making a "good" latte art.
(comments based only on your slides)
I loved the idea inserting nice video into your presentation:) It was interesting because I though making latte art is much harder than it actually is.
返信削除Suggestions:I though there were too many words in one slide.
I loved how you actually brought the tools and showed us the video! it was really interesting.
返信削除suggestions: maybe less words on slides and simplifying the context cause it was sometimes hard to follow.
Overall Impression:
返信削除Very good using a video which no one else had used. I thought it was very interesting to do a topic which you are good at doing.
Suggestions:
Like everyone else says, maybe there were too many info in 1 slide. So keep them simple let the audience understand the presentation slides and context even better.
It was very nice that you have brought the actaul kit and showed us how to make a cappuccino! And you have used the video well to actually visually show us how cappuccios are made.
返信削除Suggestions: the video was a bit blurry and hard to see! Thats about it!
Good use of the video. It made it much easier to understand. talking about your experience was interesting too.
返信削除Suggestions:
It would be better for you to more focus on the pouring part.
I wanted to know how to actually make one!
Things I liked:
返信削除how you said the goals of your presentation at the beginning and how you included the video.
Suggestions:
It could be better if you simplified and emphasized the words in some parts.
Hi Miki,
返信削除Thanks for a very enjoyable How to presentation on how to enjoy latte art. I felt it was well-prepared and presented with passion!
Likes:
1) Nice clarification of purpose at the beginning. Also, I felt you achieved it well in those 5 minutes.
2) Great use of objects and video to illustrate the steps.
3) Impressive use of voice and body language. Energetic and friendly. As you wrote, I think you spoke very effectively.
4) Nice management of Q&A. Exemplary.
Suggestions:
1) As I was watching your live presentation, I did not notice any problems at all. My notes don't show anything.
2) Watching the video again, some small points are possibly to put your notes down and speak without them (if possible). Holding notes is not a problem, but ideally you would deliver without them so that you can exert more energy and have more eye contact.
3) The font size for some slides could have been larger with fewer words, as noted by classmates above.
Nice public speaking!